Sunday, 1 September 2013

IMYAMVD - Chapter 3

Apologies for the time this has taken but I have substantially overhauled and rewritten much of Chapter 3.  Please let me know what you think of this revised version.


































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10 comments:

  1. Truly wonderful! We are all so lucky that you have shared this with us. You have improved on perfection.

    With gratitude, Michelle

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  2. Good improvements, such a dive into Peter's mind. I love the way he's becoming a sissy, I start to hate Fancy, and I'd like to see her humiliated properly.
    Thank you for the story. Please don't wait too much for chptr 4!

    V.

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    1. Thank you so much. I am sorry about the gap between Chapters 2 and 3 but the revision required a lot of planning, rewriting and editing. S

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  3. this time I did not cum, but the sexual tension was at top level.
    Good guy Peter, I love to see him sissiyfied.

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    1. Thank you. But "good guy"? I'm not so sure.
      S

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    2. good sissy, you're right.
      where is the next chapter?

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  4. Whens the next chapter

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    1. Sorry it took so long to complete Chapter 4. I hope Chapter 5 won't take as long.

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